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Lutztoons
19th Jan 2019, 4:31 PM

I really like the way you portray character movement without breaking the panel borders. I feel like there's a lot of low-level psychic communication being exchanged between them here. Maybe they don't even realize it.

Oooooh, they're trading notebooks...I have a feeling that David is going to react differently to Delilah's story than her friend did.

Delilah's shirt changes color on the first panel! I just noticed that!

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Cooks
19th Jan 2019, 6:49 PM

Haha I wish! She's just putting down her notebook and David is looking at it happily. There will be notebook shenanigans in the future.

The colours are just transitioning. The panel that has her normal colours is when David notices the reality of the situation (his staring causing her discomfort).

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ColdFusion
19th Jan 2019, 8:56 PM

Hehehe, Nead. I miss school supplies.

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